Wednesday, 18 November 2015

The First Day Of School

The First Day Of School                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            On the first day of school I woke up at 7:00 o'clock and my mom made eggs for breakfast. After I got dressed up and brushed my teeth. Then I put on my shoes and sweater and went to school. When I got to school I  wave goodbye to my mom and headed to the field and found my teacher Mrs.Persson I was happy to see some of my friends in my class when the bell rang are class went in and started the day. First we did some language and after we ate snack and went outside to play and when we came in all of us did some math.After we ate lunch and went out agian and when we came in we did french and at the end of the day I walked home and told my mom about my first day of school.

3 comments:

  1. Dylan,
    I am glad you wrote about the first day of school. That tells me some things. First of all, it was a while back so the fact that you remember it so well makes me think it was a positive day for you!
    The other thing I like about your blog, is that it is a recount, which is what we have been working on in class. You have done very well on your recount, remembering a beginning, middle and end, as well as adding in some of those specific details, to make your writing interesting! Great job!

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  2. dylan,
    wow you used a lot of detale you most love school i was happy to when i found out that mrs persson was my teacher

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  3. dylan,
    wow you used a lot of detale you most love school i was happy to when i found out that mrs persson was my teacher

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